Charles Darwin, being a keen observer of nature, changed our understanding of the living world by his deduction: “every living thing shares a common ancestor”.Darwin looked intently at life. Interestingly, he noted that, while several organisms were just slightly different from each other, they were equally perfectly adapted to their environment. These and several other observations made him curious to search for answers and therefore resulted in the underlying principle of modern biology; the theory of evolution. This theory enables us to analyse our genes and fight with viruses, and to realize the fossil record of the earth and its biodiversity.Darwin looked intently-and we saw the world in a new way.
Olorunleke Feyisara Eyiwumi
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Whose story? That of Darwin: he reappears as subject of the first 3sentences: good job!
The rest of the blog continues to flow: good zigzag pattern and cohesion (this/it).
This theory enables us to analyse our genes and fight with viruses %fight viruses%, and to realize %understand?% the fossil record of the earth and its biodiversity.
Nice concluding sentence: short summary.
Olaf
Dear Feyisara,
Nice blog and pictures too.There is a flow and perfect use of connectors;therefore,this...
However your topic and the forth sentences are long while the second one is too short. In future try to balance.
I would recommend a change of the title to `Charles Darwin`s theory of evolution`
Otherwise I enjoyed reading your blog, cheer.
Njira Njira.
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