Can you belief that the most revolutionary findings in the world as the effect of dreamed? The most revolutionary findings in chemistry were the discovery of the structure of the Benzene molecule and the structure theory of molecules as the effect of dreamed by chemist ‘Friedrich August Kekule’. He worked for years to discover the atomic structure of benzene. One night he dreamed that many snakes flitting in the floor, then they united into a ring of six snakes follow each other’s tails, spun around in a circle. It induced him to propose the atomic structure of benzene as a hexagonal closed six carbon ring. If you are a good dreamer, then you can solve any problem and become a scientist.
Thurkathipana Navaneethan
Thurkathipana Navaneethan
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Good blog: original and it stays with you.
Nice start: 'Can you believe' draws people's attention and the end-weight is for the main idea f your story: 'dreams'
Mind spelling and grammar, though: 'dreams' not 'dreamed' and to believe v. a belief.
You have a clear story-line, by using the scientist as the subject of your sentences in the 2nd part of the blog.
The final sentence links up with the first: you come full circle (no snakes here :-)
olaf
Nice blog. It's simple and informative particularly for people who aspire to be scientists of worth like I do.
However, I observed a few grammatical mistakes apart from that which Olaf commented on, such as: 'six snakes following each..'not 'six snakes follow each..'. Rather than 'It induced him..', I would use 'This induced him..'. Moreso, I would refer to benzene as a 'closed six carbon hexagonal ring' not 'hexagonal closed six carbon ring'.
You made a striking conclusion. Indeed a future of worth belongs to men of great minds. Good blog!
Olorunleke Feyisara Eyiwumi
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